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submitted by Dawn Dawson — last modified 2008-03-04 09:37

In response to this week's trigger word.

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Teeth crunched to gravel all split into chips.

No prizing the jaw, no parting the lips.

 

You pleading with eyes, so sick to appeal.

But nothing to access in eyes brimmed with zeal.

 

Nothing to access but spittle and tusks.

Blob of pure loathing, unswallowable drop.

 

Snorting and windmilling his dislocated leg.

Pigface coming for you.

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Posted by Dawn Dawson at 2008-03-04 00:31
The image used is my own.

EMOTIVE!

Posted by Samantha Penberthy at 2008-03-04 12:30
Dawn,

I really enjoyed reading this. You're so descriptive in your writing which is wonderful; your ability to paint pictures with your words made for an exciting perusal.

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Posted by write at 2008-03-04 20:31
I also really enjoyed reading this piece. The imagery is quite terrifying and the picture you have posted with it is just brilliant.

-Beth
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