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A poem about four sisters written as the seasons.
by Lucille Cutting posted on 2008-03-11 21:44 last modified 2008-03-18 14:18

Autumn was not like Summer,

She wasn’t bold nor bright,

She was subtle and many hues of light and dark.

Autumn didn’t have that cold cold draught of Winter,

She was a soft breeze,

The chill behind the sun,

The visible breath of air before the coming of night.

Autumn was closer to Spring,

in every sight and sound,

But different in every feel and smell.

Spring was light and unpredictable,

Autumn was constant and reliable,

Spring was the feeling of life, the sense of production,

Autumn was the graceful death, the eloquent dry.

Autumn was alone,

She could stand unaided,

Everyone of her sisters were a beginning,

Autumn was the end.

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Well.

Posted by Ennis C. Quillante at 2008-03-18 21:22
Dearest Lucille,
This is rather a 'splendiferous' poem. a firm execution, a composition. it woos...

Thankyou!

Posted by Lucille Cutting at 2008-03-18 23:40
Hello,
Thankyou so much! I must say I like the word splendiferous, it has a nice ring to it.
I wrote this poem one day whilst looking out the window at all the different shades of colour, warmth and life nature provides.
I'm glad you enjoyed it,
Lucille.
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